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This animation is about a boy, Travis, who wants to win a skateboard race against the neighborhood bully, Keith, by any means possible. He finds a comic book where a hero in distress calls upon gods to help, and decides to tries it out for himself. However, he finds that these gods are not kind to little boys who want to use them to win a race instead of save the world. Thus, he has to face the consequences and learn not to mess with gods the hard way!
This animation is about a boy, Travis, who wants to win a skateboard race against the neighborhood bully, Keith, by any means possible. He finds a comic book where a hero in distress calls upon gods to help, and decides to tries it out for himself. However, he finds that these gods are not kind to little boys who want to use them to win a race instead of save the world. Thus, he has to face the consequences and learn not to mess with gods the hard way!
2 comments:
Hi Lauren-
I like the textures. The perspective seems a bit off. The yellow lines don't seem to match the sidewalk lines. Perhaps if the lines on the sidewalk were going in the other direction?
I love the fantastic look of the hill. The trees blend in a little with the background. Perhaps you could darken the grass?
Good work!
Sheila
Though I know the distorted perspective is intentional, Sheila has a point in that it may cause too great a disconnect to have characters skating down that street when everything is so wonky.
There is a line to, well, skate here. You want things to be striking and graphic, but they also need to be able to convey the space and geography of your action.
And you have a lot of action. Good action, too. So just remember: all the best action sequences let you know where you are, and what is happening.
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